This is really interesting how you write the same thing from 3 different points of view. It's amazing how differently they all perceive the same thing, especially Chakotay and Tom. If Chakotay hadn't been drinking when he first approached Tom, maybe he would have been more clear about what he wanted, but he didn't do much better in round 2 when he was totally sober. I'm looking forward to what happens next. Thanks for writing!
Thanks for your review! To be fair to Chakotay, he did try but Tom wasn't listening closely enough. In the next round it will all come out though...
Oh wow, this was so sad! I felt so bad for Tom I actually cried. The story was really well written. I hope that eventually it will work out well for Tom. I hate sad endings! Thanks for writing.
Oh yeah, there's more - I'm about halfway through the next set of scenes. I hope to post them next week.